revision WC essay

Ivan Kapkov

Literature & Performance
Ms. Guarino


The Glass Menagerie is a memory play that we have been working on over three months in addition to our performance we had to write a WC essay that would describe your experience from observing the material. The first thing that you should always start with is review the assignment sheet and rubric. In order to write a successful essay we should fully understand the form in which you will present your final draft. Looking at the required length, tone and style of the assignment. Introduction that contains  context and background is the second step of your essay that will play a big role in your reader opinion.
This essay must include the content of the play as well as idea of the play and our group performance experience. I spend a lot of time working and revising my essay, however, there are plenty more things that I have to include and work on. In my revision I will work on arranging the material in order to provide logical meaning. It was hard to include all the important material and be specific in some of the paragraphs, you can see the boundary between the ideas. It is really important to put the sections fluently from paragraph to paragraph, that’s the portion of revision that I have to work on the most. Each topic sentence must introduce the subject of each paragraph clearly, to support the paragraph with clear idea of what it will be about. Each argument must be clear and specific to show the reader that you clearly understand the topic of your writing. In addition to make my argument strong and specific I have to provide evidence and examples, be sure that all the examples or quotes do work with my argument. Another very important part of any essay that shows is a original and creative title. I still have to work on my essays title, in my opinion title is what brings readers curiosity. Finally revision is mainly focused on overall content of text. You have to largely focused on sentence level and grammar. Reading you essay aloud will help you a lot in a sense of your understanding of what your reader will get from it. You want your essay to be helpful for reader to understand your story and your experience and in order to do it you have to read aloud to yourself and improve anything that you think sounds undefined improve.


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