Diane Ackerman "feedback"

From reading the first two poems we can define the specificity and creativity of writing that the writer Diane Ackerman provides us with. Her style of writing is very different from the rest writers and poets that I had rad a learned before. Diane Ackerman uses multiple metaphors that expense the perspective of her thinking and our understanding, for example:  " As our metal eyes wake
to absolute night ", "With our scurrying minds " metaphors like those really get us to think and observe the poem what makes it more entertaining.  Her lyrics transform into a bigger meaning throughout the story or a poem, creating a background opinion and shared experience. The seed " main idea " opens up throughout the poem. By reading her writing I could define the creative writing and joy that she gets from writing poems and short stories.  

 What was motivating you to create your writing ?

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